Warrior General Games

This is a friend of mine's LB and my DT/NT would like to play for the same team. Both looking to start for a team in a casual league.

http://goallineblitz.com/game/player.pl?player_id=883916


http://goallineblitz.com/game/player.pl?player_id=1068799

Take this however you like. Asking to start with the builds you have would be a stretch or one that desperate.

Could you give advice for what could be improved upon for the build, rather than just throw insult?

we might not quite be at the elite level yet, but Eddie Hansen has been a very productive starter in the BBB leagues. advice is always welcome though.