Warrior General Games

Here is were you post all comments to the column I will be writing. Let me knwo what you guys think> I am trying to write it through the eye's of a sports wirter for more Drama. Like we have enough????

I suppose it's fair...but the American Invaders will not lose again this season and we are going to win it all! Our first loss was a close and hard fought game, but we just needed to get that first game out of the way so we could adjust our strategy going into the season. We hope the Washington Chairman stay undefeated until week 10 so we can be the ones to soundly defeat them. The Invaders are dying for a rematch with the Prague Punishers to prove that the spanking they gave us last year was nothing more than a "any given sunday" fluke.

I liked it. There were some grammatical issues in a few places but, overall it's pretty damn good. The layout could probably use a few tweaks in the spacing and layout. Honestly, that's something I'm sure will come naturally as it develops over a few "weeks". Keep up the good work.

Oh, and 24 points will win a lot of games for Rome. You still have to score more than us to beat us.

I love your effort, but how about typing it up somewhere else and then spellchecking it?

Everyone is a critic. But I did type it in word and spell check it, sorry guys!

my bad

No worries you guys keeping me in check will only improve what I do in the column so please let me know things I can always do to improve. I think that the next format I will do a piece on each game and give a game ball out to the best player of the game. then do Like a power 3 for each conference? I am still debating. I have a day or two to decide.

Thanks for the respect for Sheboygan. We'll try to prove you right.