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vladykins
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Jul 19, 2010 06:21:49
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Originally posted by Loco Moco
e Park eighty-eight
or is it e park 8 8?
vlady haiku fail?o_O


Difficulties with
referential haikus are
understandable.



I took it 8-8
I could have put a hyphen
To make it more clear
 
HoyaHater
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Jul 19, 2010 06:56:42
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Originally posted by Loco Moco
Difficulties with
referential haikus are
understandable.

This is not haiku
It's just a long-ass sentence
With line breaks in it
 
Loco Moco
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Jul 19, 2010 07:18:40
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Originally posted by gocincinnati
Originally posted by Loco Moco

Difficulties with
referential haikus are
understandable.

This is not haiku
It's just a long-ass sentence
With line breaks in it

You might have me there.
I'll have to check my rule book
to see if you're right.
 
Loco Moco
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Jul 19, 2010 07:27:56
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.... to be haiku, the verse must express a thought, feeling or mood.
The verse cannot be composed of more than 17 syllables;
it cannot have more than 3 lines;
and it cannot rhyme.

Damn, I win and lose.
While my sentence structure works,
No more rhymes for me.


 
Epark88
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Jul 19, 2010 14:49:58
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Haiku 101:
You just gotta let it flow!
Watch the master work:

CoP, wussup?
I run Haiku up in here
Don't get it twisted!...

 
Loco Moco
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Jul 22, 2010 10:30:15
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It's just a scrimmage
or maybe a wake up call
Don't sleep on the Cult

 
Loco Moco
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Jul 22, 2010 10:38:13
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Good game Buffalo
Semarang was just too much
No victory, Jones

 
Loco Moco
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Jul 22, 2010 10:40:42
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The Dirty Penguins
Won the 4th quarter battle
Lost the other 3

 
Loco Moco
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Jul 22, 2010 10:49:38
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Pu Dong in the house
Showing the skills that made them
The triple-A champs

 
Sal Basss
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Jul 22, 2010 10:52:49
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Originally posted by Loco Moco
It's just a scrimmage
or maybe a wake up call
Don't sleep on the Cult



Are you kidding me?
Your team beat a nobody
HO HO HO HO HO
 
vladykins
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Jul 22, 2010 11:03:06
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Forbidden City
HotBeef Sundae on your face
GG wish to you.
 
Loco Moco
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Jul 22, 2010 12:42:46
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Originally posted by Sal Basss
Are you kidding me?
Your team beat a nobody
HO HO HO HO HO

I am not kidding
What do you consider us?
Leave Vlady alone

 
Epark88
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Jul 22, 2010 17:25:48
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Preseason Kool-Aid?
Yellowish and kinda warm;
It's not fit to drink...
 
Loco Moco
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Jul 22, 2010 17:43:54
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Originally posted by Epark88
Preseason Kool-Aid?
Yellowish and kinda warm;
It's not fit to drink...

Epark eighty-eight
has earned my utmost respect.
Quality haikus!

 
JefT@nk
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Jul 22, 2010 20:56:51
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Originally posted by Loco Moco
Epark eighty-eight
has earned my utmost respect.
Quality haikus!



Completely agree
Haiku not for the novice
That guy knows his stuff
 
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