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Dpride59
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PM me your pitch to catch22, I call shenanigans
 
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Ours was #1 s7-s8GLBdots needs 1rde to put PhilJacksons shitty dot back on waiver wire! Come dunk on suckers and fools in WEPRO as we pillage the villages of the uncircumcised euro trash who were breast fed until they were 18. Inactive forum- great dots-odens


He def didn't pick the best pitch
 
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I forget what it was really, it was kinda short.
 
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Originally posted by Dpride59
Ours was #1 s7-s8GLBdots needs 1rde to put PhilJacksons shitty dot back on waiver wire! Come dunk on suckers and fools in WEPRO as we pillage the villages of the uncircumcised euro trash who were breast fed until they were 18. Inactive forum- great dots-odens


He def didn't pick the best pitch


Was Catch22 raised by wolves?

how do you not pick that pitch
 
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Originally posted by Voltron
I forget what it was really, it was kinda short.


funny. He really didn't give it to the best pitch. He is a clown
 
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wtf are you talking about
 
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Originally posted by Dpride59
funny. He really didn't give it to the best pitch. He is a clown


I didn't say mine wasn't the best pitch.
 
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Originally posted by Voltron
I didn't say mine wasn't the best pitch.


Catch said the team with the best pitch gets his dots!

 
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Originally posted by Dpride59
Ours was #1 s7-s8GLBdots needs 1rde to put PhilJacksons shitty dot back on waiver wire! Come dunk on suckers and fools in WEPRO as we pillage the villages of the uncircumcised euro trash who were breast fed until they were 18. Inactive forum- great dots-odens


He def didn't pick the best pitch


I'm not trying to butt in here, but I can't help it.

Seriously, Stern, THAT was your best pitch? I know you're too cool for grammar and all that, but this wasn't some random forum post. This was a pitch for Catch's dots, where he said he would give them to the best pitch.

If you're trying to pitch someone on joining your team, the first rule is to probably make it somewhat intelligible, probably define the roles his dots would play, outline your overall plan, etc... You don't want to write something he has to read 17 times just to decipher it.

The dude asked for your best pitch and you sent him a line of code from Zaxxon. It reads like an epileptic kid had a seizure while typing out his grocery list. Were you hoping he was dyslexic? You probably could've sent him a better pitch just by slamming your hand against your keyboard and hitting "send"
 
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Zaxxon couldnt hold a candle to Tempest imo...
 
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Originally posted by haole
I'm not trying to butt in here, but I can't help it.

Seriously, Stern, THAT was your best pitch? I know you're too cool for grammar and all that, but this wasn't some random forum post. This was a pitch for Catch's dots, where he said he would give them to the best pitch.

If you're trying to pitch someone on joining your team, the first rule is to probably make it somewhat intelligible, probably define the roles his dots would play, outline your overall plan, etc... You don't want to write something he has to read 17 times just to decipher it.

The dude asked for your best pitch and you sent him a line of code from Zaxxon. It reads like an epileptic kid had a seizure while typing out his grocery list. Were you hoping he was dyslexic? You probably could've sent him a better pitch just by slamming your hand against your keyboard and hitting "send"


If you can honestly read the second part of that pitch and not laugh out loud.... well then your parents are most likely brother and sister.
 
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would be a lot funnier if it were easier to read, imo

but even if it was the funniest pitch he received, funny =/= best pitch
 
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Originally posted by haole
would be a lot funnier if it were easier to read, imo

but even if it was the funniest pitch he received, funny =/= best pitch


Just my personality then, If I said best pitch and received some outlandish hilarious pitch I would immediately be accepting that one.

And Stern writing easier to read is an oxymoron.
Edited by Phil Jackson on May 21, 2010 00:19:56
 
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Originally posted by haole

It reads like an epileptic kid had a seizure while typing out his grocery list.


not funny imo...
 
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I thought it was pretty funny. And at least he was honest about the team forum.
 
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